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在這個(gè)套路滿天飛的時(shí)代,干什么不得有點(diǎn)套路?寫essay肯定也是要有點(diǎn)套路才行了!在陪伴我們Meeloun走過這么年的小伙伴們多多少少都已經(jīng)會(huì)寫essay了,知道怎么寫essay之后隨之而來的一個(gè)問題就是:essay如何寫出深度?當(dāng)然大家掌握了essay的行文格式、字?jǐn)?shù)字體要求等等之后慢慢就會(huì)覺的 怎自己的essay怎么沒有深度?別人簡短的一篇essay能拿到A自己卻不行,這就是essay深度不夠的原因, 本文中我們先來為大家分析essay寫作中introduction部分寫作套路,后續(xù)我們會(huì)持續(xù)為大家推送其他部分的寫作套路,敬請大家持續(xù)關(guān)注、
前面也給大家整理過一篇關(guān)于introduction寫作的文章,大家可以回顧一下。今天我們要給大家說的套路就是——SPQR架構(gòu)!說完架構(gòu)我們再給大家說寫作步驟,先把introduction的深度提起來,一起來看看吧。
SPQR架構(gòu)
SPQR架構(gòu),就是由Situation、Problem、Question和Response四個(gè)部分組成,用于組織文章中的觀點(diǎn),對前言的展開和文章的整體架構(gòu)具有很強(qiáng)的指導(dǎo)作用。
S:Situation 情景
這就是你對于這篇文章的topic,你首先很想勾勒的情景。
一般這個(gè)situation statement是平凡的,或者一個(gè)大家都普遍認(rèn)可的大道理或者現(xiàn)象。這個(gè)點(diǎn)在于,你說的這個(gè)話,是感覺很正確的話——“truth universally acknowledged的話。這樣才能讓老師和讀者產(chǎn)生共鳴,給出hook,引人上鉤,忍不住看。后面會(huì)有例子的。
P:Problem 難題
這個(gè)就是situation的引申。這個(gè)情景,有沒有什么東西讓它變得更困難,更復(fù)雜?
它有可能是因?yàn)椋?/p>
有些事情是錯(cuò)的,而導(dǎo)致的。
有不同的聲音或者阻擾。
一些新的變化或發(fā)展導(dǎo)致的
其他任何有可能的原因
那這個(gè)難題就會(huì)引到下面的question了。
Question 問題
這個(gè)問題就是你需要回答的essay question了,也就是你在這篇論文研究的主要問題。
有時(shí)候,你在想這個(gè)question的時(shí)候,就會(huì)跳回前部分的problem,然后再做調(diào)整。
而回答問題,就自然跳到下面的response了。
Response 回答
這就是你的essay statement或者thesis statement。對于前面的問題,你是怎么回應(yīng)的。
掌握了上面的套路之后,接下來給大家說說寫作步驟:
第一步:初步構(gòu)思你的introduction
Read your main idea. Now, write a complete sentence about your main idea.
第二步:擴(kuò)充你的introduction,記住寫它是為了吸引你老師注意!
Reread your introductory sentence. Add a one or two more sentences explaining your main idea. Remember that the job of your introductory paragraph is to get your reader’s attention.
第三步:寫完正文后,再來改改改。相關(guān)閱讀:http://www.lxws.net/new.php?id=1077
說完了套路之后我們再來結(jié)合實(shí)例為大家分析一下這個(gè)套路到底實(shí)不實(shí)用:
題目:A new marketing mix model to rescue the hospitality industry: Evidence from Egypt after the Arab Spring
作者:Doaa Salmana, Yasser Tawfikb, Mohamed Samyc, Andres Artal-Turd
以下是這篇文章的introduction部分摘錄.
The tourism and hospitality industry is the most diverse and vibrant economic activities. It represents one of the largest market segments in Mediterranean (MED) countries (Thulemark, Lundmark & Heldt-Cassel, 2014). The industry was built on active products and service innovators and frequently set trends that developed different brands. The brands* popularities were developed so that customers could identify them with their particular values. The portfolio of this industry includes different hotels, companies, chain operators and small medium enterprises (SMEs).
【Meeloun評析:這一大段都屬于提供背景信息,也就是 SPQR架構(gòu)里面的Situation情景部分】
In south MED social or political challenges arena had negative consequences on the tourism industry. The turmoil that occurred in Egypt, Libya, and Tunisia whether on the social or the political arena had negative cost on almost all aspects of the economy. The tourism sector in particular suffered huge losses in the years that followed the turbulence (El-Katiri, 2014). The unprecedented circumstances have driven the tourism sector to a continuous decline on the sector's profitability. The drop in returns drove hotels to adopt short tactical strategies that could help in at least reaching the breakeven point. Among the adopted practices many rely on discounting advertising campaigns in national newspapers, downsizing in the labor force, and cutting the cost of operation are amongst the adopted practices. Applying these practices didn’t provide any clearly state fruitful results.
【Meeloun評析:這部分都屬于SPQR架構(gòu)里面 的Problem難題,引起Question問題.盡管沒有明確地簡要介紹相關(guān)研究和找出先前研究的缺陷,但事實(shí)上在后面的文中會(huì)出現(xiàn)references來支持的.確實(shí)也有文章是在introduction部分不寫出他人研究的,這個(gè)可以看你導(dǎo)師的具體要求】
Here appears the importance of this study. This study sheds light on, how embraced management practices in Egypt related to the employed marketing mix have led to maintain occupancy rates of hospitality properties at its safe boundaries.
【Meeloun評析:這部分就是介紹你的研究(論點(diǎn)陳述),它屬于SPQR架構(gòu)里面的Question問題和Response回答】
This country's study will improve our understanding of the main issues characterizing the countries' losing and wining visitors along the transition process. The study is organized as follows: it starts by overview to the Egyptian hospitality industry, then the theoretical frame work of the hospitality industry in Egypt, followed by the research methodology and finally the results, discussion and policy recommendation.
區(qū)別就是兩者意思是不一樣,具體的不同如下
prevent from中文意思是阻止,制止;妨礙
That's because the particles differ in the amount of solar energy that they prevent from reaching the ground.
stopfrom中文意思是vt. 阻止
《簡單愛》——周杰倫;
《情非得已》——庾澄慶;
《小星星》——汪蘇瀧;
《就是愛你》——陶喆;
《唯一》——王力宏;
《慢慢喜歡你》——莫文蔚;
《喜歡你》——陳潔儀;
《約定》——王菲;
《一路上有你》——張學(xué)友;
《親密愛人》——梅艷芳;
求婚的英文歌曲
1、《MY LOVE》——westlife
“Oh yeah,And oh my love, I'm holding on forever .Reaching for a love that seems so far. So I say a little prayer .And hope my dreams will take me there.”
曾經(jīng)我有一段時(shí)間沉迷于英文歌無法自拔,雖然很多我都不會(huì)唱,但是旋律好聽,又對學(xué)習(xí)英文有很大幫助,我也收藏了很多好聽的英文歌,下面為大家推薦,希望大家能喜歡。
首先我先放幾張圖片推薦
圖片一下子截不過來,還有好多.
pretty boy , the day you went away, nothing's gonna change my love for you, love story ,big big world , trouble is a friend , count on me ,because of you , traveling light , wolves ……
上面介紹的這些都是我特別喜歡的,有些當(dāng)年超級火,很多人都能哼上幾句呢
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